Wednesday 4 February 2015

Poppy's 100wc

It was a normal day, I was walking along the African plain and I was eating a sandwich. The sky was getting dark and grey. I was walking along by a cliff. I could see something climb up. I couldn't see what it was, maybe it was an alien?! I said, "I don't care what you are, you might be miserable or hungry, so I'm going to run!" I started to run, I saw a hyena chasing after me. I warned everyone. We ran to the airport and my family went to England, our home, and it was over, phew.

1 comment:

  1. How scary to be chased by a hyena Poppy! I think you wrote this really well, using punctuation correctly. Very well done.
    Mrs Prior

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