Wednesday 4 February 2015

Maddi's 100wc

It was a grey, miserable day. It was lunchtime at the Smith's house. Maddi, Paul and the rest of the family were very hungry (including Rufus, the pet hyena.) "Mummy, Daddy, which wall are we going to climb on today?" asked Maddi. "The middle one," replied Mum. "But you need to eat your sandwich first," but in Dad. "Ok then," moaned Maddi as she nibbled her sandwich, one crumb at a time. "Hurry up!" said her Mother hurrying Maddi, "Come on!" Shouted her father rudely. "Attitude," muttered Maddi crossly to herself. Half an hour later Maddi had finished her sandwich...
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3 comments:

  1. Freya Lawley5 February 2015 at 18:55

    Well done Maddie it is amazing.From Freya.

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  2. Beech Class6 February 2015 at 11:40

    A pet hyena?! How unusual. I like how you managed to show Maddi's personality in such a few words. I can tell that she really didn't want to go hill climbing. Am I right?
    Well done Maddi. You have written really well. Don't forget to really read through once you have written just to check for the odd mistake.
    Mrs Prior

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  3. Unknown20 March 2015 at 05:58

    I loved your story maddi especially when you wrote 'one miserable day' Maggie x

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